Below is the second version of Thursday’s poem. Please let me know which one you preferred.
One by one the lights go out
leaving whispers of their warmth
like smoke trails in the dusk.
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The end of all hope (& Get to know the author #2, part 2)
A (wise) man of two faces 
The second version is much more accessible; however, I like them both.
Thank you 🙂